My Lands: Black Gem Hunting

Destruction of Arch-Ruin

Very good job, just add more details of the battle and the reward is yours.

Very nice touch adding the pictures and story embedded together. I can't stress enough how much these efforts help in bringing a story together.

That said, I agree that there is very little description (or none) of the actual battle.
Perhaps you can one or two more slides before the last one? Seeing your affinity for using pictures to illustrate your story, I can see you making these battle slides interesting!
Also I am curious which magic item you found, perhaps it can be added to the story.

Hope to see the finished version. Cheers

krpan, the reward is waiting fo you on the server.